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What is this feeling?
What makes me want to reach out to him
And cling to him and pull him away with me?

What is this need
To make that other girl disappear?
Is it madness?

What is this hatred
That burns inside me towards her
But mostly at myself?

What is this urge
To run up to him
And scream "I love you" like I never could before?

What is this voice
That calls me a coward
And says that I'm too late?

What is this pain
That makes me want to change myself
And make him look my way?

What is this fear
That makes me hide and watch him
Smiling at her without him knowing?

What is this feeling?
It's the worst one I've ever felt.
It's heartbreak.
Because I'm me and I'm partially sadistic. After something sweet there needs to be something bitter.

Finally, I wrote a poem based off of Heartbroken
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ChasMandala Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A very emotional piece indeed - great job. :nod:
Ishamar Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
I am there now.
You have said everything.
Cammie-Pink Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014   Artist
i have been there before. Even now, I don't know if the person I love wonders as to whether or not I'm waiting for him.
Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
WOW...this is beautiful..:clap:
what strong and very powerful details..
I enjoyed the creative flow words.
I am so loving this well done piece. :headbang:
TheMagnificentMorado Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad that you like it so much! :D
Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yes I are most welcome:hug:
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